Re: [Kadde] Fatality - Aus 7/12/2014 ?
It is true that verbosity has a somewhat bad name, and is often abhorred by some of the most notable literary luminaries, however I'm afraid that I have to disagree with you.
I'll concede that Shakespeare had a point when in Hamlet, he eloquently argued that "brevity is the soul of wit, and tediousness the limbs and outward flourishes," and I will also admit that that Mark Twain is likely not entirely out to lunch, so to speak, when he rather satisfactorily demonstrates his well-conceived distaste for unnecessary, superfluous adjectives in the following sentences of writing advice which are so clearly carefully constructed with the utmost concern for his craft:
“I notice that you use plain, simple language, short words and brief sentences. That is the way to write English - it is the modern way and the best way. Stick to it; don't let fluff and flowers and verbosity creep in. When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I don't mean utterly, but kill most of them - then the rest will be valuable. They weaken when they are close together. They give strength when they are wide apart. An adjective habit, or a wordy, diffuse, flowery habit, once fastened upon a person, is as hard to get rid of as any other vice”
However the point your are missing, here, is that BASE Jumping is simply an entirely distinct and different discipline from the sort of literature that concerns Twain and Shakespeare. BASE jumping is a discipline wherein the consequences of irrational and irresponsible behavior are death or severe injury rather than simply the injustice an unpublished tome collecting dust in the deepest crevasses of some aspirant's writing room. Therefore, I posit to you, that we must - in the most dire of senses - utilize every imaginable resource to convey safety information which, I hope I don't have to remind anyone, was acquired through the tears, sweat and often blood of your predecessors (An illustrious grouping of individuals which I humbly consider myself to be a part of).
Therefore since BASE Jumping is essentially nothing more than a constant effort to narrow down every possible avenue of safety procedures and best practices, I propose that we should take a similar approach with our prose as we attempt to disseminate those hard-earned findings throughout the greater BASE jumping community.
The logic, I think, is rather simple: I think we can agree the one of the foremost utilities of words, particularly in this case, is to narrow down and specify ideas in our efforts to distinguish which ideas have intrinsic value to the human endeavor.
I see this self evident fact as analogous to aviation safety. In the same way that we attempt to narrow down and specify best safety practices with larger quantities of discerning testing, larger quantities of carefully considered theory, and larger quantities of high quality experience, we should use the full potential of words to elucidate exactly what those best safety practices and approaches are, and in this case I propose that in a similar vein, the noble venture of increasing safety could be best served by using absolutely massive, astonishing, almost cosmic levels of words, even if it requires that we spend most of our time at work on basejumper.com having these sorts of discussions.
Each word used chips away at the mountain of uncertainty that is an unfortunate presence in any aviation related pursuit, and therefore we must use as many as we possibly can; we don't have time for the overly aesthetic concerns of the likes of Shakespeare and Twain. It is simply too important for that because lives are on the line.
So Shakespeare, Mr. Clemens, despite your formidable literary reputations I respectfully disagree and urge everyone to ignore Kadde's advice and both write the longest posts imaginable and get better with feelings and words in order to more fully glean benefits from their overuse.
I'm sorry to call you out on this, Kadde, but I feel so strongly about this that I simply have to speak up and correct your ghastly errors. Because as the psoriasis lesion often says in such situations: look who's wearing the proverbial pink tutu now.
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