Re: [robconway] looking for 1st base jump info
All right, I'll stop being a dick and try to redeem myself by offering some constructive criticism.
First, let me repeat Rob's original message.
In reply to:
yo, just looking for some info on maybe getting some instruction on BASE. i live in Omaha, Ne. and it doesnt seem like anyone are base'ers here. i dont even have gear yet, but i am ready to learn. what to expect? wheres the best place to get gear? wing loading? best base canopy? rig? i'll take all the info u can give. Peace- Rob
Let's assume that it is in fact hard to find information on BASE jumping; Google doesn't exist, there are no introductory articles at the top of this forum, and you need a secret password to access BASE WIKI.
How then, could the message above be written? I'll take a stab at it...
In reply to:
Hello,
I've been skydiving for a while now and I'm approaching the 200 jumps mark. I know jump numbers don't mean everything, but I think I'm ready to start taking the next step and learn more about BASE jumping.
I live in Omaha Nebraska. I've looked around on my dropzone and talked to a few people, but from what I can tell it doesn't seem like there are any BASE jumpers in my neighbourhood. If you know any locals, please drop them my email address. Perhaps they don't mind helping out a beginner with some questions.
Also, I've searched the internet for more information on BASE, but it appears that nothing is available. Can anybody point me to some good resources?
Thanks,
Jaap
Writing it this way sends two very different signals.
First of all, it explains that you have put in effort to find local jumpers and online material. Only when your own attempts failed, did you decide to come to this forum and ask us for help. Extrapolating this to BASE jumping, it gives me higher confidence that you are self-reliant person.
Secondly, it uses proper punctuation, spelling and grammar (cue Rhonda Lea to find the spelling mistakes in my writing). This shows a modest amount of attention to detail. Extrapolating this to BASE jumping, it shows that you may have or gain decent rigging skills.
Now many people will counter my point by attacking the reverse. Please don't. I'm not implying that people that ask for help from the get-go and write poorly will make shitty BASE jumpers by definition. I know a great deal of people whose writing is as crap as it gets, but they're incredibly experienced BASE jumpers. I won't name names. Conversely, I'm a decent writer but my BASE jumping is complete shit.
However, when you're a beginner and you don't have any credentials, you're going to need all the help you can get. For starters, that means putting in some effort and taking the time to write well. It tells the more experienced jumpers: "Hey look, this guy doesn't mind putting in some time and energy in the sport we love so dearly."
Treat it as a job-application. Are you going to send prospective employers a poorly written resume that doesn't list the work you've done in the past? My fellow jumpers will engage in an activity that is potentially life threatening, surely I'd treat them even better than I treat my employers.
All that said, I have to revisit our hypothesis that BASE information is hard to find. With this forum, its search feature, Google, the BASE WIKI, and so forth; there is really no reason to ask any of the questions posed in the original post, except for maybe one...
In reply to:
What to expect?
Hostile behaviour on internet forums from assholes like myself, and great camaraderie at the exit point from friends like myself. Rob; I look forward to shaking hands just before we make that two-way off a bridge some time, smiling.
I encourage everybody to read this:
"How To Ask Questions The Smart Way". Although targeted at computing related questions, it applies equally to forums on any subject matter.
Cheers
Jaap Suter