Re: [base736] Academia BASE . . .
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"...disgrace for the scientific community."
As a member of said community, let me assure you that this is not the case.
I am a member of said community too. I have no PHD, but I hold a M.Sc. degree and I still enjoy a great deal of research in my professional life as well as from my armchair.
I belief this abstract is a example of what is harming science. If we don't communicate clearly we allow people to trust irrational explanations for phenomenons they don't understand. We would all still be creationists if Darwin hadn't been a great author.
Let me stress again that I strongly belief in vocabularies to make communication more effective. I don't see a problem with entry level barriers for those trying to get into a science. Not all papers have to be accessible to laymen.
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"A great writer aims to make life easy for the reader."
Not strictly true of technical publications, where the primary goal may be to say precisely what one intends -- no more, and no less.
That is always the most important goal, even for non-technical publications. If an author says more or less than what he intended he failed to communicate his message. Making life easy for the reader is a secondary goal. Nonetheless it is one that we should not forget.
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Though I find it obtuse, and therefore difficult to read in places, the words used in the paper were probably chosen carefully to make very specific statements.
I have not yet read the entire paper and I am therefore basing my opinion on just the abstract. Forgive me for saying this but unless your vocabulary comfort zone is at a drastically different level than mine, I find it naieve of you to think that the authors chose their wording with the intent of making specific statements. I agree that they chose carefully, but only to further obfuscate their message.
Let's have a look...
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Edgework experiences have been subject to some discussion in recent literature.
What is useful about this sentence? It doesn't contribute anything to the abstract. But let's assume for a minute that it has purpose, then the use of "been subject to" is still a capital sin. This sentence is more clear when rewritten as: "Edgework experiences are discussed in recent literature."
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A form [BASE jumping] that finds a nexus between licit and illicit activities
A form?
I wrote an email to my mother the other day. It read like this; "A form that offers great pleasure, drinking coffee is an every-day activity." I intended to write: "I like coffee and drink it every day.", but I was worried my mother might think I'm dumb.
Sure, an email to my mother is not the same as a scientific paper, but come on....
Furthermore, BASE jumping doesn't find things. Jumpers do. Perhaps BASE jumping establishes a nexus, but it certainly doesn't find it. And what's with licit and illicit activities? You mean that some of things we do are illegal?
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BASE jumping—provides a fertile field for ethnographic and theoretical research.
I can appreciate the fertile field analogy. The inclusion of theoretical research is offensive though. I doubt that the authors meant the meta-science that researches theories. They're just talking about research that is not carried out in the field. Which, in this context, is the same as not saying anything at all.
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In criminology it provides insights into the sensual motivations and experiential frameworks for illicit social action in conjunction with moments of marginality and resistance.
Sensual is a poor choice of words here. They might mean "sensory", they might mean "of physical nature", but I doubt they mean the most common explanation of this word which says that we all get boners from BASE jumping.
And why is the framework it provides experiential? Is it because BASE is a real life experience, instead of a made-up scenario? Well, duh.
Besides, this sentence is wrong on another level too. I think they are trying to say that within criminology BASE provides insights in sensual motivations, as well as experiential frameworks for blah blah. Now they are saying that BASE provides insides into the frameworks. I doubt this is the kind of insight they are looking for.
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BASE jumping—the activity of illegally parachuting from bridges, buildings, antennas, and cliffs—...
A flawed definition. Need I continue?
This abstract is the kind of text that turns a disinterested society into an uninterested society. Poor communication gives opponents the ammunition to attack our observations and conclusions with flawed logic.
I wonder if the authors are conducting a study on how marginalized adrenalin seekers use the form of digital debating over literal frameworks to create a nexus between sensual behaviour and thereotical research.
I mean that the authors of that paper are probably lurking around in these forums to find a bunch of bored BASE jumpers flaming each other over a piece of text none of them wrote.